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Modern Letter Writting 8

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von Monika J.

I act for Stephen Collier. Mr Collier has consulted me regarding the dispute between you.

Mr Collier informs me that you entered into a contract with him in May of last year. It was agreed that you would act in the capacity of consultant for my client to assist him in his business of importing goods into this country from Eastern Europe. My client tells me that you have not fulfilled your obligations under the aforesaid contract and that he is losing income as a result.

I am instructed that you assured my client that you had excellent business contacts in Warsaw and Prague and could furnish my client with goods from those areas at a much more competitive price than he is currently paying. Mr Collier tells me that he covered the costs of two travels that you made to visit Poland and the Czech Republic in July and September of last year respectively. He has provided me with all of the receipts in respect to these trips.

As my client has seen no benefit from these trips abroad and has no proofs that you made the trips, we request evidence of your activity on my client's behalf or a full reimbursement of my client's outlay concerning this project. My client wants to know how you spent his money.

Naturally my client has no wish to continue his business relationship with your consultancy firm and we require the immediate return of any paperwork or other confidential documents that you may have in your possession with regard to my client's business affairs.

If we do not receive a satisfactory response from you within 14 days of receipt of this letter then I have said to my client that he has grounds to start proceedings against you without further notice. Please note that if this matter comes to the court then you will make additional costs.

I would be most grateful if you would acknowledge receipt of this communication at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

  • Mistake of using an archaic word.

    • the contract

  • Mistake of using a word that is appropriate in a contract.

    • provide / supply

  • Mistake of confusing a verb with a noun.

    • trips

  • Mistake with preposition.

    • for / in respect of

  • Mistake with uncountable noun.

    • poof

  • Mistake of being too direct or abrupt.

    • My client requests a full account of how his funds have been used

  • Mistake of using language that is too informal.

    • advised

  • Mistake with an article.

    • court

  • Mistake with collocation.

    • incur

  • Mistake of using a very 'flowery', old-fashioned phrase.

    • Please confirm as soon as possible that you have received the letter


Dear Colleague

Taylor v Abernathy Sports & Leisure Ltd

I refer to your letter addressed to my client which has the day 14 July 20XX written on it.

This letter is in connection with the law suit that has been made against my client, Abernathy Sports & Leisure Ltd, by your client, Mr Taylor. Mr John Rogerson at my client's head office has been dealing with this quarrel to date, and he has supplied me with copies of all of the relevant documents.

To begin with the legal reasons for Mr Taylor's claim, I understand that his complaint is in respect of an injury to his neck that your client had during a session in my client's Liverpool gymnasium and fitness centre. Your client claims that he was using a new weights machine and that no-one from my clients' employees was available to give Mr Taylor instructions as to the safe use of the machine before he was allowed to use it. As a result of this Mr Taylor injured his neck and claims my client was in breach of the duty of care owed to him. In short, Mr Taylor claims that my client was not careful.

I see from the claim form that Mr Taylor is claiming for loss of his money from working as well as for moral damage.

My client intendeds to file a defence to this allegation on the basis that several employees can provide strong evidence to the contrary. In addition, my client will seek to recover from Mr Taylor any money for lawyers and court expenses arising from this matter. Perhaps your client would like to reconsider his claim in the light of this information.

  • Mr Lowe

  • Dated 14 July 20XX

  • Claim

  • Dispute

  • Grounds

  • Suffered

  • None of my client's staff were

  • Negligent

  • Earnings

  • Emotional distress

  • Costs


Author

Monika J.

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